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At night under the stars
I look up and think
Someday the world may end
But the sky will never die

I look up and think
I will never live to be 1,000
Or see everything in the world
Still, the sky will never die

Though I will never live to be 1,000
Above will never end
It does not sadden me
Because the sky will never die

At night under the stars
I look up and think
It's beautiful this way
Because the sky will never die
©2008-2009 ~fayedove
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Author's Comments

This is an entry to :iconmeowsap:'s Eternity contest. =D Originally I was gonna draw a wordless, one page comic retaining to the part "The world may end but the sky will never die" but, as you can see, I went with doing a poem. X3 So for that I'm really early.

You can go to her userpage: [link] and the information will be right under her recent journal if you're interested. :nod:

P.S. Originally this was something of a pantoum until my friend Hannah beta'd it and we ended up butchering its pantoum form. That's why a significant amount of the poem is repeated.

To Do List:
1. Do homework
2. Color Zutara pic
3. 2 Belated birthday drawings to do

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:iconmeowsap:
Oh, awesome! :D I'll add it right away. :)

Good poem too... :heart:

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:iconsolvabibble:
Oooh, I :heart: it!! Very nice =D

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A little girl said, "I want out of life 4 animals. A mink on my back, a jaguar in the garage, a tiger in the bed, and a jackass to pay for all of it."
The teacher fainted.
:iconfayedove:
=D Okay. :)

Thanks! :heart:

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:iconfayedove:
Thanks, Solvi! :hug:
And thanks for the fave. :heart:

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known as taiyo at Distant Horizon and Taiyo-chan at FF.net

Proud Taang shipper and Zuko/Toph/Sokka multishipper
:iconshayerahol22:
ooh, this is really good! <3 I like it a lot, great meaning!


Though, I think that sometimes the rythmic scheme gets a little off occasionally, might just be me though...

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:iconlenlen46:
Oh, I like it!

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:iconsuperaura:
AWESOME!

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:iconredjaredjar:
Wow this is awesome! =D 1st time in years I actually finished reading a poem! X3 I love this one though! =)
:iconfayedove:
Thanks, Shay! :hug:

On the poem? Oops. X3 I doubt it's just you cuz that's my weakness in poetry. X3

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I believe in Jesus Christ my Savior. If you do too and aren't scared to admit it then copy and paste this in your signature!

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